A suggestion was made during critique that I had missed the fact that the left-most onion "kissed" the edge of the table line....this is a no-no that I did indeed miss when I submitted it for critique. So, in the interest of presenting the painting as it exists today, I am showing it again after that correction was made. I simply added another loose flap of onion skin that took the top edge of the onion past the table edge line just a bit.
Thanks Rhonda for your good eyes! I hope to get started on my next rendition of these onions later today. Wish me luck!